Her toes covered with blood
poor feet, listened to music
No pause to the movements
Beats slowed down
Spins ceased
She was me, he, you and we
Unafraid, the pain left her
Light reflected at the corner
Silent grief, Silent killer
No tears left to cry.
©️Athira2021 All Rights Reserved
Nice!
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Thank you Nehal, Hope you’re doing well
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I am. Hope you are too.
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Yes Nehal…👍🏻
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🙏🙏🙏
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wow! Very good!
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Thank you Dwight
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You are welcome!
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👍🏻
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Such deep intensity in this.
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Thank you so much Pragalbha
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Wow!! Awesome 👏👏
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Thanks much..Hope you’re doing well
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No problem, yeah I’m good 🙂
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👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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Awesome 😎
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Thank you Riya..
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Amazing write.
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Thank you so much Kritika
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Welcome 🙂
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👍🏻🙏🏻
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🖤🖤
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🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you Ashmita
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You are welcome ❤️
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👍🏻🙏🏻
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Can feel the intensity 💟💟💟
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Thanks a lot Vani…
We can see people with different situations..
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Phylosophical!
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S Indira..Hope you’re doing well
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Wonderful 😊😊
I have posted…do check it out 🙂
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Regarding with your new post right…
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Very movingly evoked
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Thanks a lot..Hope you’re doing well
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You’re very welcome
All is well thank you.
I hope you are getting on ok
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Yes thank you for asking
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💖❤️
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🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Profound write!
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Thank you very much…
We can see many experiences around us
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Athira, your words are so deeply profound, expressing the concept of Oneness through the journey we have all been on. No tears left. That all by itself speaks volumes. As does the bloody feed. Wow, just wow! xo
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Thank you so much Amy…
It happens to many people around us.Sometimes we will ignore the scenes, some will travel through the minds.
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OH WOW Athira, that was really quite descriptive. I thought of a ballerina when I started reading it and it escolated into love gone bad maybe? Curious if you care to share? ❤️❤️🙏
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Dance is my passion..My areas are into Kathak, classical,western and so on..It’s all about a girl I knew, I felt to write it as a poem..It can be happens to anyone in this world.
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Oh I love dance as well. I will have to look up Kathak classical. My favorite is jazz. Thanks for letting me know. Yes, it sure can! ❤️
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👍🏻💃💃💃
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🥰💃👯♀️💃👯♀️Dancing Queens!
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Yeah Cindy👑
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👏👏👏👏
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👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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❤️🤗👏
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You are the queen👑
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And you the princess! ❤️👯♀️
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Nonooo..its all Cindy…
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A comes before C
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Oh..nooo Cindy scored
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lol
A you’re adorable
B you’re so beautiful
C indy’s delight
D you’r so darling and
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Wowww…Cindy’s magic
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so are you dear girl!
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It’s Cindy…Dear Cindy
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Have great a day!!! ❤️
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Soo whats plan for today
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I have watched your dance video few days before too..a subtle movements
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Oh sweet of you dear one! ❤️
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🙏🏻
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🙏
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Cute subtle movements
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Oh make a post of you dancing sometime! ❤️
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👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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👍👍👍
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fascinating
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Thank you do much Kate
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Very moving! Happy Friday ❤
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Thank you Frances
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Wow. That is powerful, Athira. Beautiful. 🙏
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Thank you so much Jeff
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Welcome, Athira. My pleasure. Have a lovely Sunday. 🙏
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Thank you Jeff..Have a blessed Sunday
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I felt the speaker’s pain. 💓 Moving poem, Athira.
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Thank you so much Michele..
Hope you’re doing well
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You are welcome. I am. 🙏
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🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Very nice, It felt dark yet serine and beautiful. I have just started a poetry page and maybe you can check out some of my work on httpscharkie.wordpress.com
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Yeah thank you for following me..I just visited your blog..
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Thx, I appreciate it
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Most welcome
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Dance……..🌹🧚♂️
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💃💃💃
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Beautifully written 👌
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Thank you so much..How are you? Hope you’re safe.
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All good here 🙂 thank you hope you’re doing well and keeping safe.
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Yes..Thank you..Stay blessed 👍🏻🙏🏻
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Means a lot 🙂 you too. Take care and stay blessed
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Thanks much Sowjanya
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An intensely touching piece!
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Thank you so much🙏🏻
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An intense and powerful poem!
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Thank you so much…Have a wonderful week
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Awesome 😊
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Thank you Shreya
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Hope you are doing well 😊
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Yes Shreya..Thank you🙏🏻
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👍🏻😊
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The pain of the speaker and the dark beauty of the poem left me speechless (⊙ˍ⊙)
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Yes Harshita…Life is unpredictable for everyone.
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Wow, this was absolutely beautiful. And written so abstractly too!
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Thank you so much 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Vivid imagery. Loved the flow.
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Thanks much..I’m glad to know..
I’m happy if it’s touched you🙏🏻
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It’s lovely.
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Thanks again!
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I sense sadness.
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Yes Frank, Life directions
Mixture of emotions..
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I saw in the comments you love for dance. We are social ballroom dancers – well, at least during pre-Covid times.
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Woww great…💃
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you so much Eugenia..
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Most welcome!
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Intense flow
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Thanks much
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My pleasure..
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Nice work.
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Thanks a lot…Have a great day👍🏻🙏🏻
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