Sweet nostalgic wind
Pulling me back
A group of shadows
©️Athira 2021| All Rights Reserved
#Poem #Freeverse 18 #Life Signatures
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A Journey of real life experiences & Observations
A Journey of real life experiences & Observations
Sweet nostalgic wind
Pulling me back
A group of shadows
©️Athira 2021| All Rights Reserved
Crosswalk 
intuitive atira. good one
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Thanks much Shwetha
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Well composed Haiku, Athira!
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Thank you so much Indira..
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Noice!! 🖤🖤
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Sooo how should we stop it..:)
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I have no idea 😅
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Mee too..haha
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thru the copse
we hear
the breeze
neither coming nor going
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ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ
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🙏🏻
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😋
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Mmm. I like the play of the wind in the shadows. Beautiful, Athira.
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Thank you Jeff.
Hope you’re doing well !
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You’re welcome, Athira. Always. Doing well! Hope you are too!!
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Yes Jeff, thanks for asking !
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That’s quite a nice haiku
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Thanks much Navin
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You’re welcome Athira….
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🙏🏻
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This is a lifetime puzzle. Unfortunately, shadows remains
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Yes true Deepak…
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Thank you for visiting my blog..Keep supporting🙏🏻👍🏻✍🏻
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I love this Athira! You have painted a beautiful picture with your words!
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Thank you so much Bettie..Have a wonderful day ahead
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♥️
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🙏🏻
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Athira, this is a very good Haiku. But i have a doubt. Did you use shadows in this Haihu as a positive or negative thing? Good Haikus are hard to write i guess.
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Of course it’s in a positive perspective..
But in case of readers it might differs, both positive and negative outlook can be visible in them.
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This is starkingly beautiful. There’s a sense of polarity in the last line, which really opens up the poem to interpretation. Lovely work in 17 syllables.
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Thanks much..I’m glad you enjoyed my words🙏🏻
Shadows remained as shadows itself…
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My absolute pleasure Athira. It is truly wonderful.
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🙏🏻👍🏻
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Fantastic
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Thank you so much🙏🏻
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in shadow and light you delight Athira! 💖
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🙏🏻
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💖
Shocked I missed so many of your posts! 💖
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Mee too sometimes..
I searched your name to find the posts..
I won’t allow to miss anymore..
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oh man, life is busy.
Thanks for looking me up!
sooo sweet of you!
lol.. I bet we will somehow but we’ll try not to!
hugs and love! 🤗💖
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You’re such a motivation Cindy..
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You are so kind, I need that today!
Thanks!🙏
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Most welcome Cindy!
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💖🤗 big hugs!
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Thanks much Cindy
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pleasure!
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Mine too!
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You’re a doll!
❤️
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Why it’s soo..
Dolls are lifeless..
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lol… ok how about a clown… lol..
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Soo sorry I don’t want it..you can take it:)
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lol… what then?
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Nothing special Cindy..how is covid situation there?
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I think better than there at the moment..
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🙏🏻
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🙂
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Soo Cindy is trying to bring a smile on my face..
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Did it work?
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Yes it always works Cindy:)
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💖👏🙏🤗
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🙂
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