A girl needs a secure hand,
A hand never leaves her hand.
A girl needs a true heart
A heart that never ends the love for her
A girl needs a pure heart
A heart that always keeps her safer
A girl needs a safe place
A place that she can sleep tightly
A girl needs a home
A home built out of love
A girl needs freedom
The freedom for expression of thoughts.
A girl needs the acceptance
An acceptance as a woman
As a daughter
As a wife
As a mother
As a sister
As a grandmother
As a HUMAN BEING
Nothing more she needs
Β©οΈAthira | All Rights Reserved
Hmmm. You’re making me think. Cheers, Muriel
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That’s my intention too…
To think deeply through my lines…ππ»
Thanks much!
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watch pete townshends give blood. quote give blood and there are some who will say it is not enuff. oh boy.
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Very beautifully expressed Athira…
Yes freedom to be just ‘her’ is what a girl needs .
Stay blessed always.
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Yes Krish, unfortunately many denies..
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Thank youππ»
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Very positive words. Thanks
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Thank you very much!
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So beautiful and inspiring lines of this poem ππ·God Bless ππΉ
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Thanks a lot Mrs.Menon
Stay Safeππ»
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So welcome and you also take care Dear ππ·β₯οΈ
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Thanks much..
Take care, stay safe!
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That is the true will of a girl, inside all the wishes, this is what actually wants the heart. A will, a girl demands to get, and should.
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Yes Aadya..I don’t know where this world is going!
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Same here!
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Good job! I love it! Boys too of course.
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Yes I too agree…ππ»
But people rarely identify the real needs of life only that’s the difference..
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yeah…..
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The last line is profound and tears the heart…human yes. So beautifully written Athira in such a powerful and evocative manner:)
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Thanks much Vishal..Have a wonderful weekend!
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This is a very empowering poem.
“A girl needs freedom
The freedom for expression of thoughts.” – This is very important and powerful!
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Absolutely. POwerful and insightful. Along similar lines – a blog article I wrote recently – Feel free to check it out – https://authorjoannereed.net/stop-asking-for-permission-when-you-dont-have-to/
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Thank you Joanne..
Yeah I have gone through the article..Much appreciated..keep writing βπ»
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Thank you!
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Always welcome Joanne
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