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Daytime Moon
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Crosswalk 
Very cleverly evoked and a lovely photograph
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Thank you so much, mostly she is present in the sky on daytime nowadays.
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You’re very welcome
It’s the same here…quite beautiful
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Yes hope she is waiting for the Sun☀️
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Oh…what a wonderful notion…maybe because the sun is so low in the sky at this time of the year this is the only way she can catch her daily dose of rays so she can shine on us anew each night❤ ☀️❤🌕❤
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Wonderful vivid response..I liked it..🙏🏻👌🏻👍🏻👏🏻
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You’re very welcome indeed!
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Last line is lit🔥
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Thanks a lot Anushk🙏🏻
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I love how ur poem are short and refreshing to read
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Thanks a lot 🙏🏻
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The pleasure is all mine
🙂
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🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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This is so cool!!! Cheers! 💕
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Thanks a lot Katy..How is she there?
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My pleasure! And she’s Bbbbeeeeeeautiful!!! 😊💕🤗
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Yes very beautiful
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😊
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🙏🏻
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Well written, Athira✨👌
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Naveena your response was in my spam just now notified.
Thank you for the response.
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Oh okay! Glad you found them 🙂
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Yes Naveena..at last!
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so sweet!
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I’m glad to know that you liked it🙏🏻
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🙂
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A delightful and clever piece! Thank you for following my blog. 😊
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It’s my pleasure..Thank you for reading my posts..🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Thanks for your interest in, Elm Drive Images, Athira. I like your site
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Hi Elm,sorry for the late reply.Your response was in my spam.Just now notified.
Thank you so much
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I am spoiled tonight – another moon! Beautiful poem, thank you. Also, thank you for ‘liking’ my literary post.
Joanna
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It was really nice, so I can’t leave your blog without liking that post Joanna..
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Thank you.
Joanna
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Happy Diwali🪔🪔🪔🪔🪔🪔🪔🪔
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I always wonder about a daytime moon, as what do those on the other side of our Earth see??? ❤️🦋🌀🧐
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I guess we need to investigate Sheila..
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Loved it!
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Thanks a lot Akshita…
How are you?
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So good!!
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Thank you Hema..Hope you’re fine
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I’m doing good, ma’am.
How are you?!
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Mee tooo fine Lathaa
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Another excellent poem, Athira.🙏 And, the photo is a true gem. 🙂
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Thank you so much Jeff…
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You’re welcome, Athira. A true pleasure.
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🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Beautifully written!
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Many many Thanks!
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My pleasure!
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🙏🏻
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Wow. Its awesome.
Well-written.
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Thanks a lot Simran
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Beautiful words and beautiful picture. Thanks for sharing.
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Most welcome
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Thanks alot🙏🏻
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Beautiful 😻
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Thanks a lot Riya🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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